Reminds me if tge phrase, “parting is such sweet sorrow”.

Thanks for the positive comment, PBL. I changed some stuff and added more… it didn’t look right to me and I wasn’t ready to leave it alone. Hope it still lives up to 5 pencils. If not then I’ll try, try again :)

Still great, if not better.

I think putting the word “yeah” in there was a little out of place but that’s just in my opinion. :P

Your works in this style are comfortably settled between candid conversation and song, particularly this piece.