Really well done. I like the message.

And very personal to you as well, Anthonious .. this one i like a lot dude..

Thanks guys….as you can tell I couldn’t decide if I was going to use rhymes or not…lol…just felt like I had to get that off my chest…the story that is…

Sometimes just letting the words flow can work out..
At one point i thought you were being very Shakespearean by having the last two lines of the stanza rhyme while the rest did not.. but you went off that page in the next verse.. but it still worked for me.
BTW – i sequeled your other song.

This had a emotion jumping out at me. I really loved it. Good job. :)

It is great to have hopeful poetry around here. :)

Congrats on being featured!