Comments on fly away from the flames, young ones by punpun

punpun

hey guys

I wrote this some time ago and just wanted some feedback if possible.

also should I post more older pieces for criticism/feedback? Is that a good idea?
- Posted over 7 years ago.
Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)

POST POST POST POST MORE!!

:P

Also, I do love this poem. It has the feeling of being much deeper than the words and there is a more hidden meaning behind the words that I love in poetry. (That is the reason why I write poetry.)
Brilliant job! Just bloody brilliant! XD
- Posted over 7 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)

Love the imagery you used too, by the way. :)
- Posted over 7 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
punpun

really? You won’t mind?

I have tonnes of pieces on my Tumblr, will probably port them all here.
- Posted over 7 years ago.
Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)

You won’t get any complaints from me. :)
- Posted over 7 years ago.
- 5 out of 5