This epic gets better and better. I can see the whole thing playing out clearly in my head as I read. Can’t wait to see what happens next! 11th line – “Than” should be “Then”? I would like more punctuation, but that’s just my personal preference.
This epic gets better and better. I can see the whole thing playing out clearly in my head as I read. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
11th line – “Than” should be “Then”? I would like more punctuation, but that’s just my personal preference.
I’m so excited to see this epic continued! I was hoping we’d get to see more, and I hope it keeps on going. Great addition.
Lastande Sarie 
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