Comments on Riding the bus by Mi_UFF

Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)

Goodness this is strange. Surreal, or deep in thought. Contemplating the meaning of freedom on a bus.
- Posted over 7 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Mi_UFF

Thank you!
Amazing how I get lost in thought when I’m on a bus. This happens to you? =p
- Posted over 7 years ago.
THX 0477

That was really hard to follow. Honestly, I couldn’t get past the first paragraph. Maybe I’m just too tired right now to get the stylistic aspect to it, but it seemed really disjointed. Neat thoughts and some good images, but the grammar is so jumbled it’s hard to make sense of it.
- Posted over 7 years ago.
Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)

Sometimes on long trips that happens to me. :P
- Posted over 7 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Mi_UFF

THX 0477, I appreciate your thoughts. The line of thought is not even something very consistent … The structure of the text sought to show just that. :)
- Posted over 7 years ago.
Mi_UFF

Princess, I could take a question? That means (LOA)? I saw some users with this phrase in their nicknames … =p
- Posted over 7 years ago.