Possession by glass box!! The structure of the story could be a little better.. it kinda reads like one massive run-on sentence, so it detracts from the rhythm of the dialogue. The story idea is great tho’. With a classic possession of evil at the end. Lots of a potential for future sequels.
Possession by glass box!!
The structure of the story could be a little better.. it kinda reads like one massive run-on sentence, so it detracts from the rhythm of the dialogue.
The story idea is great tho’. With a classic possession of evil at the end. Lots of a potential for future sequels.
Hey I write songs….lol….what do ya want….
The story was a bit hard to follow but it was still interesting. I want a glass box! Just not that one. :P
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