This seemed so dark and got then suddenly took a turn for the ridiculous that I had to read it twice and then I busted up laughing! Not sure what the point of it was but it’s funny. XD Also, I think you used too many commas in the first sentence.
This seemed so dark and got then suddenly took a turn for the ridiculous that I had to read it twice and then I busted up laughing!
Not sure what the point of it was but it’s funny. XD
Also, I think you used too many commas in the first sentence.
Yes I was going for something that was exactly as you described…dark and serious then ridiculous in it’s ending…it makes no sense nor is it supposed to…,just simply silly.
Am glad you found it funny…lol
i liked it lol
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