This is such just perfect! Love the format and the rhythm is poetic.

Oh my God! Brilliant! Sheer brilliance!

I’ve spent a few minutes reading what you’ve posted here, and you build some very vivid images.
I’m rather jealous actually, I always have to work really hard to accomplish something like what you’ve done here.
This one in particular is really good I think.

Thanks for the praise, everyone :)

This took some time too. It was the 2nd or 3rd revision of a poem I had written once. The original can be found here:

http://rockinbomb.tumblr.com/post/24676076047/a-letter-to-beauty