I wasn’t going to comment on this, because it made me sick. But I suppose that is what you were going for. As a writer I appreciate the emotion you evoked from me. This was truly disgusting.
Very strong imagery. This will evoke a lot of strong emotions.
Brutal. Despite the strong content it’s told very cleanly. It works and gets across your protagonist’s experience of it as well.
Woooooah! Intense, graphic, horrific, aggravating, offensive etc. Well written though, I think you got your point across very effectively.
Woooooah!
Intense, graphic, horrific, aggravating, offensive etc.
Well written though, I think you got your point across very effectively.
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