I applaud you. In my experience, dream sequences are very hard to write, to make them sort of understandable but keep it sort of confusing, because it’s a dream, after all.
Loved the description of the man with the lab coat and chains, and the serene face with insanity and darkness underneath.
One nitpicky thing: you said “there was buildings” when it really should be “there were buildings.”
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Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)