I think I would have been happier if the boys hadn’t revealed themselves quite so quickly, but I’m interested to see where you go with this, especially in relation to the “Bill…” story…

That was fun. Nicely played, especially with the “joke”, then the set up. Feels like a good old thriller, with lots of ambiguity about what is coincidence and what is artifice.

Well played. I liked the tempo in this one.