Short but…well, not exactlysweet. Thought provoking, so nicely done on that count.

I think the best part about the poem is that it’s a haiku. I mean, just think about what that implies, given the subject matter. I like it.

brevity is wit :)

very nice imagery you have going

The poem is intriguing, flows wonderfully. The title made me immediately try to think of what the ficly could be about, I ended up at some crazy SciFi world where you paid for things with your lifespan so I was incredibly, though happily, surprised.

Thank you all :)