So nonchalant, it’s almost comical. Like a diary entry of your day but for a spy. O_o

Thanks!

Okay I’m a total amateur so don’t take anything I say TOO seriously. But I think you should be a little more descriptive in your writing. Instead of flat-out saying “I was posing as a tourist,” you should drop hints that lead to the reader assuming you are posing as a tourist.

This story just seems so hard and factual when it would be nicer if it was more descriptive and flowed better.

But I get that that’s really hard to do in the amount of characters allowed in a Ficly story.