Nice job on manipulating the elements to work for the story. I tip my hat to you.

Cute moment. I know it’s all pieced together, but it still felt like a touching little ‘slice of life’ and life from the point of view of the “help”. Very nicely done.

I wasn’t in a “not another sci fi!” kinda mood.. so you get the maternal side of me. :P

Always a pleasure seeing the latest Elsha work. I thought this was particularly good because it fits the challenge requirement without feeling forced or ridiculous. Great job.