Actually a really nice poem and reflection on the whole sleep/death metaphor. Could have stood on its own without the last line, though that does make it fit the challenge.
The last line did make me snort in amusement, but I agree with THX on it being good on it’s own as reflection, but the last line tells the reader not to take it too seriously, keeps the rest on a lighter note.
THX 0477
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