Much is left for us to figure out: the setting is primarily blotted by dark, the hole in the ground is ominous yet only blankly evil, and the feminine French voice antagonizes the character even as he speaks with some form of familiarity.
In other words, quite intriguing. Where did this come from?

It came from a random visual and a mood. Other than that I just started writing and let it form itself.

I really liked this piece. It was mysterious and maybe even a little sexy?

Damn, bro, this is intense. I didn’t have the willpower to google one of the French phases but my GOD I am so turned on by your writing.

I spoke the words aloud, but they got lost in the wind. Leaves and blades of grass flitted across my field of vision, obscuring the already muddy issue at hand. If there was a moon I couldn’t see it. If there were stars they hid their twinkling reassurance from me.

Seriously? I wish I could write like you. There is nothing wrong!

(Oh, although I don’t think the French you used is sexy but who cares! I’m in love!)

I like how this unfolds itself.

Cat and mouse, and the mouse is tired. That’s how I interpreted this.

You guys are awesome.

The mysterious was intentional, but in retrospect the sexy makes sense as an undercurrent.

And Elsha nailed the ‘tired mouse’ aspect and well put.

I like its very visual but giving no clue as to where the main character is.