Haha, Deadpool is almost as bad ass as the Adventure Time key chain. Growing up is totally strange. Taking an interest in someone can sometimes make them interested in you, in my experience, maybe that’s why this girl is chatting you up :)

Cute moment. Having moved every 2 years or so while growing up I can relate though it took a while before I really started thinking about it. Nicely told.

That second sentence, couldn’t quite make sense of the use of “out” in there. Typo?

Yes, that is indeed a typo. Thanks!

There’s a genuine quality to your writing which you wrap with creative detachment. Nice!

I like this, and I’m glad it turned out the way it did! smiles and gives thumbs-up

Lovely moment of connection. I like that you get the background in the first para and then the actual ‘point’ in the second. I do think you could lose some of the commas in that first paragraph (I’m a bit of a comma hater =S)

And I agree with Precipice – there’s a ‘realness’ to your work that outlines the story but your imagination fills in the rest.