Great idea of having him change himself, brilliant!

Aw man, now I want a character sheet of myself so I can edit away that annoying ‘Lame’ flaw.

I laughed so hard! I’ve played White Wolf, did you know? Passing this link on to my gamey friends.

I had a fond hope that the WW references wouldn’t be too out of the way for the Ficlites.

By the way – what is the ficliquette-friendly way of saying “Hey – you forgot to rate it?” ;D

I didn’t rate it because this is my challenge, so I didn’t figure it was fair to rate it yet. Don’t want to unduly encourage/ discourage folks.

Dang it. Noticed that one time for someone else’s challenge – totally spaced on checking it out here. My bad. :(

Well done. This is a great idea for the challenge, and you presented it very clearly.

I’m not familiar with the games you mentioned, but I am familiar enough with the idea of pen and paper games to understand your meaning. Which I will imagine most others are as well.

I like this one very much. You didn’t go overboard with the “WW speak” (which I do understand), and I really liked the way he rated himself, very cool twist.

Another clever one! I was about to enter this challenge but my ideas are nowhere near as original as the ones I’ve read already.

Love the asthmatic wheeze.

The one thing I’m not sure on is Rich speaking at the end. The awkward look conveys the “oh shit” moment quite well and the line of speech took the edge off it a little for me. I would have liked Rich to take a step toward remedying the situation; perhaps he could keep his line but then pick up an eraser and head for the sheet…something a little ambiguous.

But then I’m only writing any of this because your story got me thinking!

Took me a couple of reads as I’m really clueless when it comes to gaming. But the story was intriguing enough to draw me through and set my mind-cogs clicking. Which is saying something for past midnight on a Friday :)