Had been meant as a sequel for the following:

http://ficly.com/stories/30523

You breathed creative life into RQuick’s previous installment. RQ’s read more institutional and formal, like, governmental, yours is tuned toward emotions, character, and a futuristic fantasy world. The broadcasting of thoughts is creepy and cool. Vashda’s feelings of distrust and unease with the broadcasting thought device tells me a lot about him, that although he’s on the same side as the queen, it’s already an internal point of conflict.

I don’t rate challenge entry’s because, as supreme decider of the winner, I don’t want to give too much away too soon.

Good job though :)

Thanks, Tad. :D