I love this! There is an adult sensibility to the poetry of prose that really drives home a sense of beauty even if it is not describing a single thing. It is a universal beauty set in ones and zeros for all to see.

And on a personal note it is really good to see you again MH!

There is a hopefulness in the memories coated in rosy fog that permeates into the future, even if it is most flimsy and delicate. On the precipice indeed.

Holy moses! It’s good to hear from you MH^^

And a sublime piece to come back on; from the challenge I was expecting something…sugary, rose-tinted instead you’ve written something beautiful but painful, and like Elsha already said, hopeful.

Always great to see a piece from you. You style and command of language in general always makes me terribly jealous! =) And that ending … pure poetry.

I echo all of the comments so far. Beautiful, and uniquely you. Nice to see you back.

Welcome back, Ed. I finally got a chance to sit down and read this… It’s gorgeous. Truly wonderful, and it is seeped in sentimentality; looking back through rose tinted spectacles when the only way through is to look forward, even though moving ahead is difficult: the wind is against us. But that’s life. We try; do; are.
I’m so glad to have you back MH

A lovely contemplation the folly of life while still encouraging that vain effort. Challengingly contradictory, in a good way.

Your vocabulary is far better than mine good sir. I knew all the words, but I was taken aback by them all used so cleverly and together. Needless to say, if I had written this it would have been much less concise.