Wow, I like the spunky lil kid! Great way of using her to describe Doe a bit more too

So I just read the entire series and I think, to this point, you’ve both done very well. You work great as a team and your styles definitely compliment one another. I’ll wait for more with anticipation.

Oh and I love all the little Dr Who references. I actually don’t mind the depth that you go into with each of the characters. It’s hard to do on ficly because of the limit but you can manage in a series.

All the pieces stand surprisingly well alone – kudos for that as well. Keep going guys!