Not an idiot. I’ve felt exactly this way many, many times. You encapsulate my experiences with religion wonderfully. You’re not alone!
Good poem – full of emotion. Great rhythm and structure. I like!

I think this was written kinda stream-of-consciousness-y, thus the active voice and emotion in it.

Thank you so much!

You okay? :( and hmm… i didn’t really like the ending >< the last statement asking if you were an idiot… idk i find it a little incongruent to the tone of the poem though… but that’s just me ><

1. You should probably be doing history, yeah, but then again I’m here commenting, aren’t I?

2. To echo petite’s sentiments, you feeling alright? The ending sounds like the persona’s breaking down into tears. There are still things worth having faith in, trust me.

Ah thanks guys, I’m quite surprised at your reactions, does this poem come across as really depressed? I’m completely fine actually hahaha. Also yeah I know that last line’s a bit wonky :| need to fix it, but it’s a phrase that I wanted somewhere in there. HM maybe this is the wrong poem for it. Also SORRY I WILL DO MY HISTORY NOW. And literature. I’m probably not breaking into tears though honestly. Thanks for the concern anyways.

Try add it after the shrug and “not me”? :3