And, hey presto, I’m a boy! lol I love it. The shift to present tense confused me a bit, but I like where you’ve taken the story. I honestly didn’t see it as leading anywhere so you’ve completely surprised me by the plot. Good job.
Thanks Elsha :P and hmm…You know? I didn’t even realize I switched to present tense… haha! Looks like this was a much needed warm-up sequel for me! And yes. You now find yourself a boy, it seems. Congratulations.
I liked the kind of rough-shod, stream of consciousness feel to it as your protagonist tries to figure his way out. I know that feeling, and it comes across well. Nice ending to it that wraps it up and allows it to go forward from there.