This is intense, well written, and it draws us in! I wonder, though, why the narrator (I’m not going to assume a gender) doesn’t send the apology. It seems unfair that it’ll “have to do” – the narrator could send the letter, why not do it?
“In my mind, I learned from you how to treat my mother the wrong way, and It was something I couldn’t forgive you for. I couldn’t stand looking at you.”
After reading this, the whole piece suddenly felt like an internal conversation with another part of the writer, in a Jekyll/Hyde way.
I hope that’s just my interpretation, but it REALLY knocked my socks off.
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RoseTone ~LoA~