Does the second sentence have a typo?

I’m with Binky. The second sentence doesn’t seem to fit together. Also, in the next sentence, the comma should be after “wing”, not after “hands”. Finally, it’s “Mildred’s red hands.”

Tragic continuation. Thanks for adding a bit. I mostly followed the second sentence so maybe you corrected the typo?

Yes, I did I corrected the typo! XD Thanks for the reviews!

Im kind of new around here! but thanks so much for the feedbacks ;)