Cute and creative. I don’t know if I followed the whole thing but it made me smile.

Heh, nice. :)

I kinda got lost halfway through but it’s still an adorable ficly. :)

Thanks guys! I had to edit a few things because the formatting changed when I saved the draft, so it’s not as clear as I would have liked it.

original!

Very different. I think I followed most of the story – super cute. I’ve always said that the best stories need no words – you’re proving my point. Woop Woop!

And even though you had a set plot in your mind when you wrote it, it’s great that everyone can have a slightly different version in their heads – makes it very special.

Thanks for entering the challenge, and for all your commenting work thus far. Keep it up!

Adorable. Thanks for brightening my morning and makin me laugh.

I have no idea…

OH! WAIT!

Ok I get it. c: Very cute. Made my day!

Cute little story. Your ability to visualize it and tell it is pretty amazing. I am curious on what got cut, though.

I feel out of touch now…I had some trouble keeping up with this one. I think I had it pretty well figured out on the third read, though. heheh.

I kind of followed, but it’s still cute.

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At first I didn’t understand it was a story, luckily the comments helped me out a little bit. :) I liked it.

Think I have an idea of it?? think it’s brilliant and creative

^. =D =3

I definitely followed, but I feel that you managed to work in a metaphor or two as well. Clearly a love story, and without giving too much away, the first few frames seemed kinda out of place and awkward, until you think about the higher meanings that could be implied. Very well done.

I gotta say, 6 and 7 were my favorite lines.

My ASCII art never works on ficly, so kudos in the first place for that. Really a good example of emotion in minimalism; I like that (and I usually get tired of emoticons quickly).