The game begins here: http://ficly.com/stories/20518

Well executed – you strike a very fine balance between giving enough detail to keep the reader immersed, without letting it take over the story.

Thanks. These have been surprisingly (to me, anyway) difficult to write. I’ve wanted them to be enjoyable for those who play the game but also remain accessible to anyone who doesn’t. I have no idea if I’ve accomplished that goal. :)

I reckon you’ve accomplished it and then some. I also found these a pain to write, which is why I ended up having a complete mental block in regard to this particular story. However, I think you’ve pulled it off brilliantly. Kudos.