nice use of free verse :)

the imagery here comes together well, just a minor point though – flickers in anger could be replaced by a verb metaphor to make it more concise, perhaps: contorts? or something along those lines

haha also it would be great if the title fit the circus imagery got a bit thrown off there

overall really like this :) the ambivalence really comes across well

I really didn’t like this though :( wasn’t he image didnt hit the nail on its head so it’s overall quite incoherent