Oh I love this! Beautifully done, sir. Just one nitpicky point, it’s gawking not gawping, right?

Nope, I definitely meant ‘gawping.’ It basically means ‘open-mouthed astonishment.’ :-)

Learn something new everyday. XD

Aye. It’s a good goal. :-)

Tidy little scene full of hopes and dreams and questions. How’d she get on this airship crew and what is the prize at the end for winning this race?

Love what you did with the characters here, the fact that they’re complete opposites makes it all the more interesting :)

@Elsha - All good questions. I may have to develop this further to answer them. :)

@airborne — Thanks! I kind of like the rough and gruff captain.