Volyu this is good. It’s got a great rhythm; you start reading it and then basically have to finish because you can’t really take a breath, and that’s cool in a piece this size.
I thought the last line could maybe use a little more lead-in, but that’s really very minor. The writing is very tight, and the character is very well realized. I do like how he hates the travel more than it seems he hates the job, or his life in general.
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