Lovely images, and well told such that I could easily imagine myself dropping in the water with her.
I think the last line should be connected with a comma to the sentence before it. In the first paragraph you use ‘together’ twice; consider an alternate word choice for one of them.
Very nice feel to it, and I liked the sense of aloneness in a positive way, both scuba diving in general and in the contrast of how your character is to the group of divers to their left.
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ElshaHawk (LoA)