Rainy mood!

Not sure how a cloud hands low.. :) I think you mean hang. It begins with some personification of nature, then swiftly turns to vivid descriptions of real things. Way to use several senses! The smiling, despite the rain, means something has gone right.

“The leaves hum low in agreement as they pass…” That line is downright magical. :)

This reads so perfectly. It really took me there and you can tell that there’s a wonderful story behind it. Just lovely!