Unusual format, because it makes me consider each stanza more independently than in a normal poem, but I like it nonetheless. Extra marks for the pun title. Overall, very thoughtful and insightful.
@brazen really undermines the feel of the poem when you know how it’s written
@jae I like writing in this format for exactly that reason. It gives much more ways to see the poem as it brings each stanza into individual focus and focus as a whole. thanks.
brazen 
Jae 
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