I like this, I like takes on Lot’s story, reminds me of this poem on his wife or something somewhere

i see you decided to publish this after all…. I guess it’s great, but my peeve’s with lines 3-4.. sounds a bit confusing haha

@pyrrhicv: ha ha ha i had to submit this as a piece from TRIPS TO THE MUSEUM and yes the art was lovelyyyy.

@pierrot: i put in some punctuation, i have no idea if that helps?

oh man i thought it was swirling sea crystalline beads like sea salt or something misinterpreting 101

yep same. the punctuation helped a lot.