I like stanza 2 & 3! though they seem sorta disconnected to 1? maybe you could work the I saw your face and the faces on currency link but I’m not sure how you’d put that in….

yeah I didn’t notice that! Does this sound better now? :3 really nice idea though XD

oh my god I LOVE THOSE NEW LAST LINES

oh alsoooo, first line, I’d seen? or I saw? because I’d saw sounds odd

Oh yeah uh! :O but Issit id seen or I saw?

I saw, I think? not too sure too