Ooh, very interesting but oh so dark! I get a female Dexter vibe from this, like this is just the beginning (whether it really is or not). I can imagine the slap of the girls arm echoing meatily in the silence of the morgue. Glad to see that you have butchered your writer’s block.

It’s funny, just as I posted this I thought “oh no! I hope they don’t think I’m copying Dexter.” I don’t even watch the show! lol. Cheers, I hope I’m back for good. =)

I never thought you copied anything. I thought maybe you were inspired by. I apologize for immediately realizing your fear >< As for the last sentiment- me too.

Beautifully written. You conveyed a wonderful sense of empathy for the victim and sympathy for the MC.

Very Dexter. Love the descriptions of the translucent girl

Oh Abbey how I’ve missed your words and flair for the macabre. A nice little dark one here and do I smell a prequel/sequel?