I wanted to repost this because I was proud of it and it didn’t get anywhere enar as much as attention as I’d like… ie none.

I like the line “When your life lines begin to rhyme.”

This is stunning. You are ever so talented.

I could see this in a kid’s poetry book with an awesome drawing to go alongside it. Well written poetry and stories are hard to come by for any audience, and kids deserve the very best, so don’t take that as a knock. From a standpoint that has nothing to do with marketing it has a wonderfully positive message of faith and persistence. It’s very sweet, but also practical and lyrical.

It’s soo good to see you back! We all missed you so much.

Brilliant to see something so positive from you =) great piece … deserves some praise and recognition!