An elegiac vision of the reluctance we feel when giving our heart to another? I liked the line: ‘slipping through your fingers’ in particular. Seems holding another’s heart isn’t so easy.
I absolutely love this poem. It’s beautiful.
wrote that one 3 years ago when I wasn’t certain whether my new girl friend would become more.
BiC
Emilou
Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)