Love it!
“Hands, you do not have a clue.
If this is true, loyalty is inevitable.”

That was ridiculously amazing! Wow! I love the whole poem, I can’t even pick apart the places where I love it most because it is just the best all over! Wow! Wow! Wow!

I agree with those two—if anything, translating made the message more clear. Both the original and the last translation are amazing. Great job!