A play on amnesia, I see, one of my favorite topics. I like the ending being disjointed, his thoughts wandering as he checks his faculties. The beginning being disjointed threw me; I had to read it again, until i realized it was in his memory, thought it was more of a story than memory narration. But it is a great beginning, amnesia is a starting over, unless his past comes back to haunt him…

Nice. I like how his girlfriend calls him after being shot. Good job on using short sentences to show his confusion.