Nicely written, and great twist!

I love the sensuality in para 2.

Nice twist, too.

I love how they turn out to be teachers instead of students!

This is a great little scene with revealing details (“artificial strawberry … body shop lip balm” is my favorite). Well done.

lovely descriptive work! I do not often notice “impressive” bits of the piece the first time, but the description of the lip balm grabbed me right away.

Nice winner.

I love it

Well put. Great twist.