HMMM…a little confusing but overall I get the gist. I’m diggin’ on the “space marine” type, feel of both stories but I feel you’re kind of all over the place??? Not harpin’ on you or your work, just giving a little insight is all. It was good don’t get me wrong I enjoyed it. Maybe you can add more background to your myriad of characters and definitions as to what they are. Keep them comin’ SAMF!
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