Wonderfully written (if not a bit run-on-y) but sadistically dark.

I do hope you’re able to write lighter things soon. 14 is too young for such darkness and pain.

Agreed with THX.

Thanks for the comments. I love getting comments, positive or negative. And I’ve checked my sentences very well, and they aren’t run-ons. People just have different styles of writing and I write long sentences, but they always have the correct punctuation and structure. But thanks for the comment!

And to reply to THX and Princess Blinky Lemontwist: Darkness. The darkness that infects my life cannot be ignored; therefore, I must write about to make it beautiful.