Entry 16

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Very interesting. Wounded, we often take revenge on anyone and if the perpetrator is handy, well then! Just out of curiosity how have the characters I introduced stuck around? I looked back through the challenge and it looked like every sequel could be independent of what came before.

Yep, it can be independent, or not. It’s really up to the writer. No rules other than to use the given words, actually.

I…I…I would be glad to be able to keep this sequence going but I fear I have not the grasp on these characters…However, they can wait in the wings for later scenes if needed, I think. Wow, fellers.

Wow! Antonio got issue, don’t he. I imagined him a bit more subdued. Nasty in a witful way. Still, I enjoyed this rant immensely. And yet, I would think your use of ‘onomatopoeia’ should procure praise in and of itself. This is fly, yo. :)

I haven’t read any of the other stories in the chain but this is very good. Love the last few sentences!

Thanks for the feedback…and the feature! I liked the last few lines myself, haha.