Small conflict of verb tense in the second sentence, but otherwise a nice glimpse into your day. Doncha just love this weather?
I caught that too and I’m not sure if it matters but I always notice weird aesthetic things- like the last three paragraphs all begin the same way. Sometimes that kind of repetition is purposeful though.
Fixed all the tense issues, more than just the second sentence. They all start the same because I am tired. :) I’m not going to change it, though.
Jim Stitzel
Robert Quick
ElshaHawk (LoA)