Interesting continuation of the story. It looks like there might be a couple errors (tick/thick).

I feel like I’m wanting more: where did the werewolves come from? Why was the captain passed out in front of her door? Are the unicorns being ground up on the ship? And most importantly what will she do next? Try to stop them?

intriguing sequel! i wouldn’t have taken the story in this direction, but nevertheless, I really dig your writing style! :-)