Interesting. Dark eyes that stared coldly after being silenced and she(?) sighs with relief. So she knows/trusts him.

On the grammar/punctuation side there’s an extra period at the end of the second paragraph and the last sentence of third should probably be past tense. Something about the first sentence bothers me.

I do appreciate the continuation though.

32 and Mr. Quick were spot on when commenting on your first part of this two parter. I enjoy how you combined ancient greek mythos and modern day tech in this one alot though. An interesting pair i may add. You could take this futher in the future perhaps?

Yeah, I don’t want him to be friendly, but at least she wasn’t attacked by someone who would kill her.. for now.

I, too, like the mix of fantasy creatures with modern technology. I’m curious to see where this goes.