Little confused where the assassination part comes into this story, unless it’s supposed to be metaphor.

This sounds like quite the rivalry. Should be interesting to watch, should you choose to expand upon it.

Thanks Jim. I’m a FTF (first time ficler?) . I have a larger story in mind that explains the title but really found the dialogue that was developing quite fun.

I figured i’d just get that start out and keep the pressure on myself to carry through.

Sounds good. Welcome to Ficly and congratulations on being a Featured Author. (1/20/13).

Mr. Quick, thank you very much for the honor of being Featured Author. I find this site to be a wonderful distraction from the humdrum of real life.

BTW, you have an amazing amount of stories posted! I am going to make a habit of reading at least 2 stories here a night…starting with yours.

Congrats on the feature!

This certainly sounds that it can be expanded in many different directions and I applaud you for that!