Hm. I like the idea, but as it stands it feels like there could be more to this, not only more detail, but more showing and less telling. But all-in-all a solid effort. Thanks for entering.
Hm. I like the idea, but as it stands it feels like there could be more to this, not only more detail, but more showing and less telling. But all-in-all a solid effort.
Thanks for entering.
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