How frustrating! foiled even in his attempt to kill.
This is a very dramatic piece and full of action.

Very cool – edges of the Fugitive. But isn’t taking aim an action in the middle of the description line?

Yeah, I know – rules weasel. But I’m not gonna let the rules get in the way of my enjoying your story. :D

Good point. I hadn’t considered that. Well, I think I can fix it and still keep the story intact. :-)

AWESOME!

Very nice. :) Oh and thank you for your comment too. =D I like this one-liner lots

you were able to tell such a horrific tale with such few words. good job.